Thursday, September 11, 2014

Wild woods


Image from google
The path was unfamiliar to me...yet I progressed in the distant way
Sharp stones hurting my tender feet..darkness prevailed everywhere
But I was unaware of the pain...I was lost in the beauty of nature around
The birds singing and flowers dancing..
I realized I lost my way out there
this path would take me nowhere 
I found myself in the middle of wild woods
Dear me,I forgot all the wounds on my feet 
All I remembered was the birds singing and flowers dancing

19 comments:

Unknown said...

Wish I could forget some of my painful moments and only remember the merry ones....nice one Nagini.

Ananya said...

Forgetting bad phases is really difficult !
nice one !

Freespirit said...

Despite going through the toughest time of life, one remembers only the joys and happiness he or she has shared with the loved ones..

Mr.Miglani said...

Feel Great to be back on your blog and reading you.Still remember IO interviewed you 2 years back.
Lovely Writing as always.

AmitAag said...

Absolutely beautiful, Nagini:)

M S Mahawar said...

beautifully written!!

i b arora said...

but sometimes pain lingers on, nice poem

Ravish Mani said...

A very deep insight Nagini. It reminded me of Kabir's couplet "Seeking seeking O friend, Kabir himself got lost."

Nikhil said...

Beautiful poem. :)

Indrani said...

Memories do recede, only it takes time. I like the happy ending.

Maniparna said...

It's difficult to forget harsh moments..but I think Nature has that power ..to heal every wound ...I firmly believe it... :-) Nice lines...

Kokila gupta said...

Beautiful lines Nagini... our grtl is a poetess also! As for the path,like you,its works better fro me too to choose the path less travelled :)

Tomichan Matheikal said...

Wordsworthian - great.

Barbara said...

Hello Nagini, I love your beautiful words and the image fits perfectly. They do say time is a great healer, but some wounds are difficult to forget. Barbara x

Ankur Anand said...

with time this phase will pass !
nice lines .. very well composed !

Haddock said...

was lost in the beauty of nature around...... wish I could do that.

Privy Trifles said...

Touching :')

The Mukhtiars said...

Very Nice

Unknown said...

Beautiful

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