Wednesday, September 10, 2014

Wild woods


Image from google
The path was unfamiliar to me...yet I progressed in the distant way
Sharp stones hurting my tender feet..darkness prevailed everywhere
But I was unaware of the pain...I was lost in the beauty of nature around
The birds singing and flowers dancing..
I realized I lost my way out there
this path would take me nowhere 
I found myself in the middle of wild woods
Dear me,I forgot all the wounds on my feet 
All I remembered was the birds singing and flowers dancing

19 comments:

Vidhya Rao said...

Wish I could forget some of my painful moments and only remember the merry ones....nice one Nagini.

Ananya Tales said...

Forgetting bad phases is really difficult !
nice one !

Freespirit said...

Despite going through the toughest time of life, one remembers only the joys and happiness he or she has shared with the loved ones..

R Miglani said...

Feel Great to be back on your blog and reading you.Still remember IO interviewed you 2 years back.
Lovely Writing as always.

AmitAag said...

Absolutely beautiful, Nagini:)

Madhusudan Mahawar said...

beautifully written!!

i b arora said...

but sometimes pain lingers on, nice poem

Ravish Mani said...

A very deep insight Nagini. It reminded me of Kabir's couplet "Seeking seeking O friend, Kabir himself got lost."

Nikhil said...

Beautiful poem. :)

Indrani said...

Memories do recede, only it takes time. I like the happy ending.

Maniparna Sengupta Majumder said...

It's difficult to forget harsh moments..but I think Nature has that power ..to heal every wound ...I firmly believe it... :-) Nice lines...

Kokila Gupta said...

Beautiful lines Nagini... our grtl is a poetess also! As for the path,like you,its works better fro me too to choose the path less travelled :)

Tomichan Matheikal said...

Wordsworthian - great.

Barbara Fisher said...

Hello Nagini, I love your beautiful words and the image fits perfectly. They do say time is a great healer, but some wounds are difficult to forget. Barbara x

Ankur Anand said...

with time this phase will pass !
nice lines .. very well composed !

Haddock said...

was lost in the beauty of nature around...... wish I could do that.

Privy Trifles said...

Touching :')

aliasgarmukhtiar mukhtiar said...

Very Nice

Rathina Sankari said...

Beautiful

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